My Whole Expanse I Cannot See…

I formulate infinity stored deep inside of me…

Jan 7

I love the fuzzy comments

Category: Life

critical thinker was kind enough to leave a fake e-mail address tied to a Tampa ip to back-up this comment…

 I’ve got an idea: why don’t you learn how to start a sentence without using the word “so” for a change. You know, since you fancy yourself a “writer” and what not.

It’s not so much about learning, that I lack a college degree, that I’m just too Goddamn stupid to differently start my sentences. It’s more of a style choice. If you don’t care for my style choices, I don’t care if you quit reading. If you quit reading, I might go into therapy, 4-6 months, we “writers” are a little off, but I promise, I will get over your absence.

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3 Comments so far

  1. Tess January 7th, 2013 3:45 pm

    You write beautifully. 🙂

  2. josh January 7th, 2013 4:13 pm

    Oh, trolls… For the record, one of the things that makes your writing stand out is the fact that it reads so naturally. It “sounds” like you are speaking the words, not calculating them.

  3. John January 7th, 2013 6:01 pm

    So, although I think that person is a Grade A bunghole, he/she actually accomplished something good. It got you to write about the comment which stirred an emotional reaction, at least in me. I feel protective of those I care about (and I don’t even know you, or you I), and this entry got me stirred up. Keep writing the way you do, for all that care and feel a connection to you.

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