May 19
Alameda #2
We walked down Alameda, sun fading away, a soft orange sky.
Lost in your eyes, lost in you, walking down a cracked sidewalk, not wanting it to end.
Thinking about your kiss, I felt no past. I felt a fleeting now, a futureless future. You’d be gone in the morning
We walked down Alameda, a song in my head and you in my heart.
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Very nice. Amazing what well chosen words can do.
Reminds me somehow of Simple Twist of Fate: http://www.bobdylan.com/#/songs/simple-twist-fate
David N: Thanks!
beautiful.
Steph: I’d wanted to write that since last year. Glad you like it.
this is beautiful. it has left me wondering whether i have experienced anything like the feeling i got after reading this, in my life. i thought about it and the fact that i can’t be sure makes me think that i haven’t and that makes me a bit sad. at least i can imagine it. thanks.